Re: What is wrong with this sentence?

Subject: Re: What is wrong with this sentence?
From: MaggiRos <maggiros -at- yahoo -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 14 Apr 2005 08:14:56 -0700 (PDT)


It's just wordy and ugly.

ABC provides an interface that lets you create folders....
or
ABC provides the XYZ interface, which lets you create
folders...


Maggie


> > "ABC provides the XYZ interface using which you can
> create folders
> > for storing your personal card information."
> >
> > Specifically, what's wrong with the use of "using
> which". I think
> > its incorrect, but I am not sure why that is so.
>

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