RE: What is wrong with this sentence?

Subject: RE: What is wrong with this sentence?
From: "Downing, David" <DavidDowning -at- Users -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Fri, 15 Apr 2005 09:27:48 -0400


It may be one of those sentences that is grammatically correct, but
sounds weird. Anyway, I would rewrite it as "ABC provides the ZYX
interface, which lets you create ... "

-----Original Message-----
From: Kapoor, Shelly [mailto:SKapoor -at- imf -dot- org]
Sent: Thursday, April 14, 2005 9:26 AM
Subject: What is wrong with this sentence?

"ABC provides the XYZ interface using which you can create folders for
storing your personal card information."

Specifically, what's wrong with the use of "using which". I think its
incorrect, but I am not sure why that is so.
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