Subject: Grammar
From: shonn_scott -at- yahoo -dot- com
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2005 07:56:36 -0600


I writing a user manual. I am trying to maintain active voice, but I'm
getting a little writer's block. Would someone tell me which is correct?

1. This screen is displayed when the blah blah link is clicked.

2. To display this screen, click the blah blah link.



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