Re: Grammar

Subject: Re: Grammar
From: Art Campbell <art -dot- campbell -at- gmail -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2005 09:51:26 -0400

I'd write (especially if it's a procedure, not an explanation):

1. Click DooDah. The BlahBlah screen is displayed.


On 9/2/05, shonn_scott -at- yahoo -dot- com <shonn_scott -at- yahoo -dot- com> wrote:
> I writing a user manual. I am trying to maintain active voice, but I'm
> getting a little writer's block. Would someone tell me which is correct?
> 1. This screen is displayed when the blah blah link is clicked.
> 2. To display this screen, click the blah blah link.

Art Campbell art -dot- campbell -at- gmail -dot- com
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