RE: Editorial/Press Release - What are some points to consider while writing?

Subject: RE: Editorial/Press Release - What are some points to consider while writing?
From: "Neumann, Eileen" <ENeuman -at- franklintempleton -dot- ca>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Wed, 2 Nov 2005 11:33:56 -0500

Hi Jennifer,

Use an inverted pyramid format. Start with the main point or points right in the first sentence. Then add more info from most important to least important. Keep in mind that a reader may stop reading at any point, so it's important to get the main facts in very early. If you start with marketing fluff for instance, you risk losing your reader with no useful info whatsoever, if they aren't vitally interested in you and your product to start with, and leave after the first sentence or so.

Another valid approach would be to start with the most interesting or useful aspect of the product. Provide finer details further down in the article. You may want to examine some newspaper articles to see how the pros do this. The inverted pyramid approach is for 'hard news' type stories, and the second is more of a feature article approach.

(Info from my journalism days...)

Good luck!


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Subject: Editorial/Press Release - What are some points to consider while writing?


I will be writing an editorial/press release for a software application. I
have not written one before, and I am interested in finding out what points
need to be considered before and while writing. I have written the help
system and user manual for this application, so I am very familiar with the

What questions should I ask myself and the subject matter expert before
writing? From the examples I have seen, the important thing is to outline
the key features of the software. Is it more important to give a brief
overview of the product, then go into the new features, or is it more
effective to describe the new features first and then go inot an overview?

I think a couple of important questions to ask would be "How familiar are
the readers with the product or similar products?" and "What
method/software do the typical potential customers currently use?"

What are some others I should consider?



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