Re: Quickie Active Voice Question

Subject: Re: Quickie Active Voice Question
From: Brian Gordon <elasticsoul2003 -at- yahoo -dot- ca>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Tue, 8 Nov 2005 13:33:47 -0500 (EST)


Is this sentence from a resume? If so, there's a typo
in "implementation," and did you/he/she really design
projects? Suggestions, depending upon what was
actually done, and assuming it's a resume:

a) Designed and implemented artificial lift systems.
b) Led projects to design and implement artificial
lift systems.

All the best,
Brian

--- "tom -dot- green -at- iwon -dot- com" <tom -dot- green -at- iwon -dot- com> wrote:

> Quick, what do you think is the most active
> replacement for the term, "for the implementation
> of?"
>
> The whole sentence is, "Designed projects for the
> imeplementation of artificial lift systems."
>

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