RE: Quickie Active Voice Question

Subject: RE: Quickie Active Voice Question
From: "Dan Goldstein" <DGoldstein -at- riverainmedical -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Tue, 8 Nov 2005 13:36:35 -0500


"Designed projects to implement artificial lift systems."

But what about the systems are you "implementing"? A more precise verb
might be in order here:
-- Designed artificial lift systems
-- Built artificial lift systems
-- Used artificial lift systems
-- Documented artificial lift systems
-- Repaired artificial lift systems
-- Trained others to use artificial lift systems
-- Wrote marketing copy for artificial lift systems
-- Created new uses for artificial lift systems
-- Integrated various manufacturers' artificial lift systems
-- etc.

> -----Original Message-----
> From: tom.green
> Sent: Tuesday, November 08, 2005 1:26 PM
> To: TECHWR-L
> Subject: Quickie Active Voice Question
>
> Quick, what do you think is the most active replacement for
> the term, "for the implementation of?"
>
> The whole sentence is, "Designed projects for the
> implementation of artificial lift systems."

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