RE: Sentense construction

Subject: RE: Sentense construction
From: "Combs, Richard" <richard -dot- combs -at- Polycom -dot- com>
To: "Hemang Antani" <hemang -dot- phenix -at- gmail -dot- com>, <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 22 Feb 2007 08:34:33 -0700

Hemang Antani wrote:

> Which of the following sentence construction would be
> suitable for American
> readers:
> (1) Listed below are the points discussed during the meeting.
> (2) During the meeting we discussed points listed below.

"During the meeting, we discussed:" -- followed by the bullet list.

Discard unnecessary words. :-)


Richard G. Combs
Senior Technical Writer
Polycom, Inc.
richardDOTcombs AT polycomDOTcom
rgcombs AT gmailDOTcom


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