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Subject:RE: You VS One From:"Lauren" <lauren -at- writeco -dot- net> To:"'Lauren'" <lauren -at- writeco -dot- net>, "'Keith Hansen'" <KRH -at- weiland-wfg -dot- com>, <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com> Date:Wed, 4 Jun 2008 14:37:48 -0700
There's a dangling comma in my example where I didn't delete a comma from
the sentence I copied. The correct sentence should be,
"Voters who want to vote in the November election must register by October
Thanks, Paul, for catching that and bringing it to my attention. Yeah, and
thanks for the sarcasm, Mike; my day was getting low on satire.
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Lauren
> I think that they are both yucky.
> The first person imperative is,
> "Register by October 15 to vote in the November election."
> But that is not really directed to the subject, which in this case is
> I think "you" and "one" are both best avoided by referring to
> the subject
> "Voters who want to vote in the November election, must
> register by October
> That's my take.
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