Grammar (again!)

Subject: Grammar (again!)
From: Deborah Hemstreet <dvora -at- tech-challenged -dot- com>
To: techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com
Date: Wed, 20 May 2009 11:53:01 -0400

Hi All,

When writing text for a brochure, which do you believe reads more smoothly:

1. We have licensed out six technologies that are in various stages of

2. We have licensed out six technologies in various stages of

Could you explain WHY you believe 1 or 2 is better than the other? I
don't want to give my opnion, as I want as objective a response as possible.



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