RE: LRV Owner's Manual... sweet!

Subject: RE: LRV Owner's Manual... sweet!
From: "Dan Goldstein" <DGoldstein -at- riverainmedical -dot- com>
To: <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Tue, 25 Aug 2009 10:17:42 -0400

[Guess what? Douglas Adams was right!:]

CapCom: "Okay Jack. The next, the next step is a, to stop up the bypass
hole, which is the hole in the center of the bottom of the canister, we
want to stop that up, because we don't want to bypass the flow, and I
forgot to tell you to get something to stick in that hole we recommend
that you either use a wet wipe or cut off a piece of sock and stuff it
in there or you can probably even crumple up some tape and use that,
Swigert: "Okay we'll start plugging up the bypass hole."
CapCom: "Okay."
Swigert: "(on board) We got to plug that hole, we can either, we can put
some, he said, what about a piece of your towel there?"

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Gene Kim-Eng
> Sent: Friday, July 31, 2009 12:22 PM
> Subject: Re: LRV Owner's Manual... sweet!
> Here's one that I've saved for years. A classic exercise in
> minimalist technical communications and probably the polar
> opposite of the LRV manual as far as elegance goes. No
> figures with callouts, few words and an exemplary job of
> targeting the level of complexity to the intended
> users:

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