WRONG!..... -ish?

Subject: WRONG!..... -ish?
From: "McLauchlan, Kevin" <Kevin -dot- McLauchlan -at- safenet-inc -dot- com>
To: "techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 2 Feb 2012 20:52:58 -0500

"We recommend that you not remove the covers that were installed at the factory."

"We recommend that you do not remove the covers that were installed at the factory."

Is the first sentence flatly wrong, or is this a matter of style or formality?

I'm at home, and my trusty Fowler's and my Strunk & White are at the office.


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