Re: How can I phrase this?

Subject: Re: How can I phrase this?
From: Gene Kim-Eng <techwr -at- genek -dot- com>
To: Jim Jones <han4yu3 -at- gmail -dot- com>
Date: Mon, 01 Jul 2013 16:31:15 -0700

The document Charlotte asked about is going to the tech. There would be a different document going to the patient. So there is not a need for one warning that informs both at the same time, which would be a bad idea anyway because of the potential for confusion.

Gene Kim-Eng


On 7/1/2013 4:08 PM, Jim Jones wrote:


Be that as it may, ...task is to find a more emphatic way of instructing
the... is good but I would phrase the task in this fashion: Charlotte's
task is to develop a sure-cut, foolproof method that directly and
unambiguously communicates a certain important warning to two different
parties [the end-user and the specialist] at once.



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