RE: Taking active vs. passive voice too far

Subject: RE: Taking active vs. passive voice too far
From: Erika Yanovich <ERIKA_y -at- rad -dot- com>
To: "M -dot- Vina-Baltsas -at- mindray -dot- com" <M -dot- Vina-Baltsas -at- mindray -dot- com>, "techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Wed, 10 Jul 2013 05:41:41 +0000

In addition to the great advice you got, here is a bit of extra.
I'd replace "to access" with the action you need to perform with the List Trends, your main goal for going there. Users access places in the GUI to perform tasks.
HTH,
Erika

-----Original Message-----

I'd use:

List Trends

To access List Trends, click the History button in the Main Screen.



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References:
Taking active vs. passive voice too far: From: M . Vina-Baltsas
RE: Taking active vs. passive voice too far: From: Lynne Wright

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