RE: What to call this thing?

Subject: RE: What to call this thing?
From: Stuart Burnfield <slb -at- westnet -dot- com -dot- au>
To: Techwr-l <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Wed, 31 Jul 2013 09:54:24 +0800 (WST)

Like Tim Slager, my first thought was "categories".

> I might try something like:
> "From the row of device categories, select HSM."

It is a very busy page, though, and someone coming to the page cold (without your instructions) might struggle to find the HSM link. How about this belt-and-braces approach:

"From the row of device categories (PIN Acceptance Devices, Non PED, HSM, SCR), select HSM."

Stuart


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