Re: Bad sentence #2

Subject: Re: Bad sentence #2
From: Margaret Cekis <margaret -dot- cekis -at- comcast -dot- net>
To: Nancy Allison <maker -at- verizon -dot- net>
Date: Fri, 29 May 2015 19:48:12 +0000 (UTC)

Re: Nancy Allison's Bad sentence #2: "In order to use USB communications to control the instrument running v. 4.1 firmware, the latest USB drivers must be installed."
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I would want a definite specification of the USB driver version, instead of just "the latest version". My new laptop has both USB2 and USB3 ports. I'd probably revise the sentence to:
"Use of USB communications to control the instrument running v. 4.1 firmware requires the installation of USB?? drivers."
Margaret Cekis, Johns Creek GA
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Bad sentence #2: From: Nancy Allison

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