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Subject:Re[2]: Caution Rewrite From:Susan Gallagher <Susan_Gallagher_at_Enfin-SD -at- RELAY -dot- PROTEON -dot- COM> Date:Fri, 21 Jan 1994 09:34:00 EST
Is this a test? Will we all be graded on this? Do those that fail to
streamline the warning get bumped off the list? Ok... Ok... Here's my
entry:
CAUTION--RISK OF FIRE
Do not operate heater before attaching
its feet in the correct position.
(works as well for base)
If you'd like to shift the emphasis...
CAUTION--RISK OF FIRE
Attach heater feet in the correct
position before operating.
%-)
Sue Gallagher |
Sr. Technical Writer | "Updating a manual
Easel Corporation | is like changing tires
Enfin Technology Lab | on a moving car."
San Diego, CA | -- Edmond Weiss
Susan_Gallagher_at_Enfin-SD -at- relay -dot- proteon -dot- com |
