Writing Style

Subject: Writing Style
From: "Davison, Grant" <GDAVISO -at- C30 -dot- NCEL -dot- NAVY -dot- MIL>
Date: Thu, 1 Sep 1994 16:56:00 PDT

Dear list,

I am having trouble with my writing style. My boss wants better
transitions between my sentences. However, I am also trying to do two
things: write in the active voice and write short sentences. He describes my
writing as herky-jerky or abrupt.

Grant


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