Re: Phrasing Question

Subject: Re: Phrasing Question
From: Bill Burns <WBURNS -at- VAX -dot- MICRON -dot- COM>
Date: Tue, 28 Feb 1995 15:05:02 MDT

Charles writes:

>>Your challenge (if you choose to accept it) is to come up with a
short (ten words or less?) title for this procedure that describes
what it does. Comments? Suggestions? Ideas?

The problem seems to be with the word "record" here since it is used as both a
noun and a verb. Using a synonym could help eliminate confusion between these
parts of speech. Maybe this will work:

"Clearing Accidentally Recorded Death Entries."

Bill Burns *
Assm. Technical Writer/Editor * "Purgamentum init,
Micron Technology, Inc. * exit purgamentum."
Boise, ID *
WBURNS -at- VAX -dot- MICRON -dot- COM * Henricus Barbatus

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