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Subject:Re: Need Help with Wording! From:Joanna Sheldon <cjs10 -at- CORNELL -dot- EDU> Date:Mon, 3 Apr 1995 18:19:52 -0400
To simplify the second sentence below:
>2. If you have more than one file vault defined, the menu
> cascades to display the file vault names. Select the
> vault in which the file for which you want to change
> the number of versions resides.
...you could say:
"Select the vault that contains the file for which you want to change the
number of versions."
If you've already made it VERY clear to the user that s/he is looking for
the file in order to change the number of its versions, you might be able to
say, simply: "Select the vault that contains the appropriate file."