Re: Need Help with Wording!

Subject: Re: Need Help with Wording!
From: Marc Santacroce <santa -at- TFS -dot- COM>
Date: Mon, 3 Apr 1995 15:22:00 PDT

At 2:05 PM 4/3/95 -0700, Susan W. Gallagher wrote:
>Hey gang...

>I've got a problem with an instruction! Select the
> ^^^^^^^^^^
> vault in which the file for which you want to change
> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> the number of versions resides.
> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Sue, how about:

>"Select the vault in which the file requiring the version change resides."

my 0.02.


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