Subject: Re: STYLE:HELP
From: Kevin Harper <kevinh -at- DEV -dot- TIVOLI -dot- COM>
Date: Tue, 25 Jul 1995 16:39:37 CDT

> Help. Which construction is better? Is the first sentence conditional?

Why not say

ALERT: Look for meat fibers as you inspect rawhide chews and dog toys. Also
sniff the product....

You get rid of your "conditional" construction this way. Also,
I took out the word "visible", as it's redundant if the inspector
isn't using a microscope or similar instrument.


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