Re: Help my sentence... please

Subject: Re: Help my sentence... please
From: Callie <callie -at- WRITEPAGE -dot- COM>
Date: Tue, 8 Aug 1995 21:14:54 GMT

>The user manual I'm editing has this sentence:

>In addition, the framis requires a thingy to have been developed, using the
>whatsis tool, that contains whoosies to be used in the whizbang.

>(It's the framis that contains the whoosies, and the whoosies that are being
>used in the whizbang.)

The chronological sequence is unclear:

Before you can use the framis:
1. Use the whatsis tool to develop a thingy containing the whoosies. these
whoosies are used by the whisbang module of the framis.

Callie


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