Re: Challenge to active-verb advocates

Subject: Re: Challenge to active-verb advocates
From: John Posada <jposada -at- NOTES -dot- CC -dot- BELLCORE -dot- COM>
Date: Fri, 26 Jan 1996 14:32:06 -0500

(clock starts ticking)

"The leaves on the sidewalk were kicked and scattered by passing
feet."

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How about...


"Passing feet kicked and scattered the leaves on the sidewalk"



John Posada
Technical Writer
Bell Communications Research, Piscataway, NJ
(908) 699-5839 (W)
jposada -at- notes -dot- cc -dot- bellcore -dot- com (W)
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