Re: Challenge to active-verb advocates

Subject: Re: Challenge to active-verb advocates
From: Jpittman49 -at- AOL -dot- COM
Date: Fri, 26 Jan 1996 13:37:39 -0500

In a message dated 96-01-26 01:56:09 EST, sgallagher -at- expersoft -dot- com (Susan W.
Gallagher) writes:

>* Passing feet kicked and scattered the leaves on the sidewalk.

>* Passing feet kicked and scattered the brightly colored leaves
> on the sidewalk under the trees.

>* Scurrying, preoccupied feet kicked and scattered the leaves on
> the sidewalk as they passed.

>* Kicked and scattered, the leaves formed a brightly colored cloud
> around the passing feet.

>Sorry, that one was *way* easy. ;-)


Ant Boy's six scurrying feet scattered the sidewalk-bound rotting vegetable
matter into shreds.
Oops, wrong list. :-)>
J.P.


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