Pulls the eye

Subject: Pulls the eye
From: Pat Gantt <pagantt -at- POSTOFFICE -dot- WORLDNET -dot- ATT -dot- NET>
Date: Mon, 22 Sep 1997 13:56:31 -0500

I was taught many moons ago in another life it
seems <very big sigh> to:

1. Remain consistent (style)
2. Avoid anything that pulls the reader's eye
from comprehension of the writer's intended
meaning

> 1b) According to John, Mary said "My mom says 'Anyone who does this is a
> moron'."
>
> The latter just seems to flow better.

--

Best Regards, Pat
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