Re: "Wish" in tech docs

Subject: Re: "Wish" in tech docs
From: Denise Lystad <lystad -at- LYNDEN -dot- COM>
Date: Wed, 22 Jul 1998 09:53:37 -0700

On Tuesday, July 21, 1998 at 1:41 PM, you wrote:

>> Step 1: From the Destination List, click on the Destination
>> you "wish" to
>> edit.
Personally, I think the sentence should start with "To edit..."
That way the reader can determine quickly if they want to read
the rest of the sentence. Why be forced to read something if that
is not at all what you want to do?

Denise Lystad
Lynden Incorporated
Seattle, WA

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