Re: Pretentious writing (was Re: Order of Magnitude)

Subject: Re: Pretentious writing (was Re: Order of Magnitude)
From: "Dick Margulis " <margulis -at- mail -dot- fiam -dot- net>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Tue, 23 Apr 2002 12:38:29 -0400


Ben,

Bear with me a moment here. I have a point to make that I think you might agree with ...

Ben Kovitz <bkovitz -at- nethere -dot- com> wrote:


>
>2. Why do people engage in pretentious usage? Now here is where it
>gets difficult. One reason is because, for purposes such as
>marketing, people need to get attention, and they need to get it
>through channels where there is a lot of competition for bandwidth.

Hmm, channels? bandwidth? Okay, I think I remember enough communication theory that I can stretch the technical meanings of these terms to include Ben's metaphorical usage.


>If the phrase "a higher order of magnitude" acquires a certain cachet

cachet? Certainly a metaphorical extension of its original meaning.

> We might even benefit from other people's practice
>of it. It might be essential to the economic engines

economic engines? Literal engines?

that create
>niches

niches? Literal niches?



Okay, so what's my point? My point is that as attractive a notion as it might be for us technical writers to man the barricades against the cooptation of technical terms by marketers, the fact is we will be overrun in the end.

English grows richer through the metaphoric use of formerly narrow terms. Along the way, we lose the original precision, to be sure; and I regret that as much as you. (Shall we talk about parameters, perhaps?)

I don't know where order of magnitude stands in this process. I know it creeps into our own marketing collateral, but I try to edit it out where it can't be justified by actual order-of-magnitude improvements. Others may not be so careful. Five years from now, teenagers may adopt it to mean "very." Who knows?

What I do know is that today's marketing cliché is liable to be tomorrow's standard diction. About the best we can do is stick a Strunk & White finger in the dike now and then.

Dick

PS: For the record, Ben, there is nothing at all amiss with your word choices that I poked fun at above. I was only pointing out that we all understand exactly what you mean even though those words formerly had narrower meanings.



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