Re: What is wrong with this sentence?

Subject: Re: What is wrong with this sentence?
From: "Gene Kim-Eng" <techwr -at- genek -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 14 Apr 2005 06:58:42 -0700


This is the sort of sentence that most good copy editors would
mark "awk" (awkward); there's nothing technically wrong with
it, but it just *feels* wrong to most readers.
Gene Kim-Eng


----- Original Message ----- From: "Kapoor, Shelly" <SKapoor -at- imf -dot- org>

Specifically, what's wrong with the use of "using which". I think its
incorrect, but I am not sure why that is so.




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