What is wrong with this sentence?

Subject: What is wrong with this sentence?
From: "Kapoor, Shelly" <SKapoor -at- imf -dot- org>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 14 Apr 2005 09:26:03 -0400


"ABC provides the XYZ interface using which you can create folders for
storing your personal card information."

Specifically, what's wrong with the use of "using which". I think its
incorrect, but I am not sure why that is so.


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