RE: active vs. passive voice

["Al Geist" <al -dot- geist -at- geistassociates -dot- com>]

Suzette Leeming wrote:

"What about "This {displays/opens/brings up} the XYZ {window/dialog
box}", where "this" is the action described in the previous (or same)
instruction."


Hi Suzette,

You bring up children, puppies, lunch.... You don't bring up a window or
dialog box.

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