Re: Wording problem! Arrrggh!

Subject: Re: Wording problem! Arrrggh!
From: "Monique Semp" <monique -dot- semp -at- earthlink -dot- net>
To: "Weissman, Jessica" <WeissmanJ -at- abacustech -dot- com>, "Nancy Allison" <maker -at- verizon -dot- net>, <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2011 08:36:58 -0700

Yes, Jessica's wording approach is similar to how I've often done these sorts of notes.

To make it a little (well a lot!) less imaginative and creative, I'd say:

* Print preview now works when no printer is installed.

This does destroy the parallelism, so what I usually do is have several groups of items in the notes:

* Added the following features:
** Windows 7 support

* Enhanced the following functions:
** Faster plot displays

* Addressed the following issues:
** Print preview now works when no printer is installed

-Monique

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References:
Wording problem! Arrrggh!: From: Nancy Allison
RE: Wording problem! Arrrggh!: From: Weissman, Jessica

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