Re: Wording problem! Arrrggh!

Subject: Re: Wording problem! Arrrggh!
From: Gene Kim-Eng <techwr -at- genek -dot- com>
To: Nancy Allison <maker -at- verizon -dot- net>
Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2011 08:40:14 -0700

I would group all the fixed problems together like this:

Fixed/corrected/resolved problems/bugs/issues:
1. Print Preview causes error when no printer is installed.
2. Selecting two widgets in the wibbly dialog blows a hole in the
time-space continuum
3. etc.
4. etc.

Gene Kim-Eng


On Thu, Jun 9, 2011 at 8:16 AM, Nancy Allison <maker -at- verizon -dot- net> wrote:

> Each item in the list begins with an active verb, which you want in a
> document that's explaining all the good things you've done to improve
> the product. So Fixed is a desireable word in that way, but plenty of
> other verbs are equally attractive. I'd like to keep the pattern of
> starting each item with a strong active verb.
>
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Wording problem! Arrrggh!: From: Nancy Allison

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