Re: Another way to say High-Performance

Subject: Re: Another way to say High-Performance
From: Jim Jones <han4yu3 -at- gmail -dot- com>
To: megan -dot- bruce -at- us -dot- bosch -dot- com
Date: Mon, 8 Oct 2012 16:14:40 -0500

Presented with ' I have the following sentence that I want to change
the phrase High-Performanceâ.
Any thoughts?

â. a high-performance standards-based, routable IP media transport system: '

I'd say that if it has to do with autos, you could keep it but in a
different place in the sentence:

â. standards-based, routable IP media transport system,
high-performance, that is .... '

OTOH perhaps you want to eliminate the expression entirely. If this is
the case then I'd go with sthg like exceptional, precision, or
high-precision.

Or you could simply elide the expression.

...with thoroughly standards- based and routable IP media... sounds
good to my ear too.

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2:47 PM (1 hour ago)

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Hello All:

I have the following sentence that I want to change the phrase
High-Performanceâ.
Any thoughts?

â. a high-performance standards-based, routable IP media transport system.

Thanks,
Megan
Best Regards / Mit freundlichen GrÃÃen / äæèææ
BeQIK
Megan Bruce

On Mon, Oct 8, 2012 at 3:42 PM, Lauren <lauren -at- writeco -dot- net> wrote:
> I guess it can depend on how vague or colorful you want to be.
>
> Off the top of my dizzy head:
>
> supercharged
> exceptional
> fast
> thorough (or comprehensive)
> sleek
> bat out of h377
> precision
> reliable
>
>
>
>
> On 10/8/2012 12:47 PM, Bruce Megan (ST-CO/ENS2.5-NA) wrote:
>>
>> I have the following sentence that I want to change the phrase
>> High-Performanceâ.
>> Any thoughts?
>>
>> â. a high-performance standards-based, routable IP media transport system.
>
>
>
>
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Another way to say High-Performance: From: Bruce Megan (ST-CO/ENS2.5-NA)
Re: Another way to say High-Performance: From: Lauren

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